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| *Ostroff, Fair and Company>>>Other - Advertising & Marketing |
Can you pls review this website? |
http://coolinvesting.com/ 10 points for the most comprehensive answer! First sentence errors: should read "little to no experience". Second sentence use of the word "Although" redundant and awkward. Third sentence: the word "the" is missing from text "who want to get into THE very rewarding world of investing in the stock market, " "OVER that period I have learned many things, that taught me how to invest and that helped me make some good returns in the stock market". Use of word "over", sentence is awkward and poorly written Use of "learned and taught" in same sentence? This sentence is very badly written. You havent used capital letters where they are needed. No paragraph structure. You really need someone to proof read your site and correct all the errors on it. Your blurb could be edited to half its length and say the same things. You should either have it proof read by a professional writer or hire one to write it. Sorry there are grammarical errors in almost every sentence. :-( and to a lot of people it will scream uneducated. I am not saying you are uneducated, I am saying the writing is bad and suggests that. Actually when I read it my first thought was that English was not your first language. I have to add that if you are setting yourself up as an Investment Consultant or Financial Planner, or Trader you have to be licensed through the Securities Commission of Canada, the US or whatever country you are in. Nowhere do you mention your Professional credentials. In fact you appear to be a student. This could get your into BIG trouble. Quote: "I will show you everything you need you need to know before you make your first investment. I will teach you basics of personal finance, offshore, penny stocks, mutual funds and real estate investing, and other most important things that you can invest in". This is the role of a Professional Investment Consultant and Financial Planner, you CANNOT "free lance" without being licensed. You do say this is a final project for your e-commerce class, one thing you should have learned in class is that this business is strictly regulated by the Government and Securities Commission All individuals and firms providing investment services in Ontario must be registered with the Ontario Securities Commission. Don't rely on their word, contact the OSC. The MFDA regulates the actions of its Members nationally. In most provinces, mutual fund dealers are required to be Members of the MFDA. However, some firms have been granted exemptions from MFDA membership by the provincial commissions. Firms that are registered in the category of investment dealer 鈥?those firms that engage in the distribution of stocks, bonds, mutual funds, etc. 鈥?must become Members of another SRO, the Investment Dealers Association of Canada (IDA). For information concerning the Mutual Fund Industry in Canada, including industry statistics and Mutual Fund Company information, contact the Investment Funds Institute of Canada at www.ific.ca. For other inquiries, including the registration status of sales representatives, contact the securities commission in your province of residence. Source(s): I am a Licensed Investment Consulant and Financial Planner with the Securities Commission of Canada Coolinvesting appears to be a well organized and attractive site. If the functionality matches the look, it should be successful. |
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