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1.On the site you posted, where is the contact information? Did I over look it? If I did so will anyone else. You really want to make that stand out.
2. Most of your links make people log in. People don鈥檛 want to set up an account just to get information.
3. I would consider re-doing that website. I found the site plain, like reading a newspaper. It needs interest. |