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| *Ostroff, Fair and Company>>>Other - Careers & Employment |
Any mistake with message below if I would like to post this to employers? |
Dear Sir/Madam, I am able to start work immediately and my course will only start next year February (it will not affect the working time because I only study at night). Hope you will give me a chance. Thank you Just some general advise: 1. Do not use parenthesis. Incorporate those in the letter. 2. Unless your employer knows what course you're talking about, include the title here. It will reinforce in your employer's mind your upcoming skill set, which is always a good thing!! 3. You have used "and" to join your ability to work immediately and the start of your course. I would suggest using "as", since the latter is the cause that you can start work immediately:-)) 4. Replace "next year February" with "February, <year>. So: Dear sir/madam, I'm pleased to inform you that I am able to start work immediately, as my course on <your course here> starts in February, 2008. My course is in the evenings and so, this will not affect my working hours. I trust you will consider my application favorably. Thank you. Yours truly, <name>Its all good perfect ? Dear Sir/Madam, I am able to start work immediately. My learning course will start next February, although this will not affect my availability as I will be studying in the evening. i hope you give me this oppertunity. yours faithfully (insert name here) "start next year February" i would maybe say instead 'will start February of next year' or 'next year in February'. Bit smoother and makes more sense, anyone agree? |
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